Tuesday 10 May 2016

Mille's writing on the lolly factory


In an old and horrible town lived a lolly factory everyone wanted to go inside it but the wired gate was always shut, until a notice got put up all around the town it said that two people were allowed to go in and look around. All you had to do was buy a ticket and you would go into the draw. A little kid about 8 years old bought a ticket with his parents money, the tickets were $1, he used all of the money their family had. He hoped and hoped that he would be one of the two people. Soon the TV show was on that would announced who won out of the thousands of people. Then they announced the first person she was called Rosy and the second person…. The little boy, he jumped up and down on his bed then raced down the stairs to tell everyone that he had won. When it came to the day he waited outside the spiky gate he waited there for ages and ages, he started to think that he missed it and the day had already been, but the guards came out and invited him in...

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